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Star Trek Fic: But One Day We'll Float (Chekov/Sulu, Mature) - A fiend with magical bunny-like powers
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Star Trek Fic: But One Day We'll Float (Chekov/Sulu, Mature)
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katmarajade From: katmarajade Date: June 16th, 2010 03:35 pm (UTC) (Link)
This is just beautiful and it gave me shiny eyes! *sniffles* I like how damaged and broken it all is without you writing it out. The hints at the horrors Hikaru has been through are so much more powerful for being left unsaid. Seeing the change in Pavel from bouncy bright-eyed teenager to war-tested man was heart-wrenching and strangely inspiring. I liked this a lot! You've got such a great style and I'm glad you're writing for this pairing now! (mind if I friend?)
cordelianne From: cordelianne Date: June 16th, 2010 03:47 pm (UTC) (Link)
Aw, what a lovely comment! I'm glad you liked the hints vs going into detail about what Hikaru experienced. I'm always of the belief that less is more, especially with difficult subjects like this. I admit to also finding their transformations heart-breaking - this was one of those fics which sorta wrote itself and I felt like I was along for the ride. I'm pleased you enjoyed! Thanks so much!

Oh yes, I'm happy to be friended and will friend back. :D
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