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Star Trek Fic: But One Day We'll Float (Chekov/Sulu, Mature) - A fiend with magical bunny-like powers
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Star Trek Fic: But One Day We'll Float (Chekov/Sulu, Mature)
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ljismahname From: ljismahname Date: June 15th, 2010 09:13 pm (UTC) (Link)
Oh this is SO good. Absolutely heartbreaking and I totally teared up. I love your characterization of them, it's very real. I adore this especially:

Sulu comes, flashing back to Pavel at seventeen, their first time. Pavel glowing with sweat, his curls wild, eyes gleaming with the most brilliant smile. Like Sulu is everything he ever wanted.

Well done :]
cordelianne From: cordelianne Date: June 16th, 2010 03:26 pm (UTC) (Link)
Aw, it was a heartbreaking fic for me to write so I'm glad that translated to you, as the reader. And that's great about the characterization - it's something I really want to get right. Yay, I'm glad you like that line you quoted. Thanks so much! :D
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